Saturday, December 12, 2015

I am director

Superglue:
Walk in from middle stage left stuck together towards center stage where the dialogue occurs when they are stuck together, then go from center stage right to left when trying to get unstuck and run out towards downstage right at the end.
They could have read the script better, with more expression and some props to show that they are in school. 

Dress code violation:
Walk in from center stage left to center stage where the dialogue occurs and kalani walking around in circles all around the stage when he is arguing about the school, back to center stage and lights go out.
While they are talking they should try to look up rather than just looking down at the script, and give their voices and face some more expression. 

Handwriting:
Alberto is in center stage while Pranav walks in from upstage left towards the center where the dialogue occurs and walk out center stage left.
They could have looked at the audience to connect with the audience and improve the expression in their voice.

Not the next cheerleader:
Kat is in center stage while prerna walks in from center stage right and dialogue occurs in center stage and when she is cheerleading she should go upstage center and back to center stage and walk out upstage right.
Kat could project her voice more and they should Move around the stage some more.

Drama class:
Ulan is center stage and Gabor comes from upstage right and the dialogue occurs from where each of them came in, when Gabor shows his how to act he should go toward center stage and ulan walks out center stage left and Gabor stays as the lights go off.
They should show more expression to their character and project their voices more effectively. 

I.O.U:
Moody is upstage right and Omar walks in from upstage left and dialogue occurs in upstage right and Omar walk out upstage left.
They should try to look up more rather than just down at their script.

Vote for me:
Mariam walks in from center stage right and Marcia from center stage left and dialogue in center stage and walk up and down the stage as if they're walking through a hall and Marcia walks out center stage left.
They should project their voices more effectively and walk around the stage more. 

Tardy:
Frederick walks in from center stage right while Gustav is in center stage and dialogue occurs center stage and Frederick walks out upstage right.
They should project their voices louder and more effectively and use more expression.